Walking on Air

One Stop Poetry’s http://onestoppoetry.com/ prompt for Day 10 of NaPoWriMo is a photo.

One Stop Poetry's photo prompt for day 10

A little senryu for today.

Walking on Air

Since the first date’s kiss
I’ve been dancing in the air.
Don’t pop my balloon.

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10 Responses to Walking on Air

  1. dustus says:

    Like how that final line almost sounds like it could be taken as pleading or even a warning. Know the feeling. Nicely done senryu.

  2. vivinfrance says:

    A good metaphor, like don’t rain on my parade.

  3. brian says:

    hehe…better watch that the second date does not do just that…

  4. 1sojournal says:

    Ahh, but you must know that now that the thought has been expressed, someone is sure to come along with a sharp hat pin, lol. Like the whimsy in this one.


  5. Nice senryu! I dig it

  6. pmwanken says:

    “don’t pop my balloon” …indeed.

  7. lolamouse says:

    Nice senryu! Delay that second date for as long as possible though!

  8. Chris G. says:

    Those first months, dates, what have you, they can leave you in a dream state…and one we certainly don’t wish to end…we can only hope reality doesn’t choose to turn to the dark…

  9. Steve Isaak says:

    Love this! Perfect!

  10. Tilly Bud says:

    Very nice indeed! Like it.

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