Daily Haiku Challenge, day 17

The prompt for today is “Ravel.”

Flickr image by glassbubblegum

My life’s a ravel,
Frayed past the breaking point.
Your love kept me whole.

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13 Responses to Daily Haiku Challenge, day 17

  1. vivinfrance says:

    Excellent – the sentiment that inspired this is lovely. I hope the love still keeps you whole.

  2. Beautiful Haiku … indeed hope and love keep us alive and whole.

  3. honeyhaiku says:

    You have such talent. Great haiku!

  4. ladynimue says:

    I liked this .. gives a hopful and sweet picture ..

  5. We all have moments of feeling that way. Great haiku.

  6. Iwrite4u says:

    Love has such powers 🙂 and they are found very rare!

  7. great loving surely does that 🙂 awwwwww lucky devil :p lol

  8. Bodhirose says:

    Love sure does have the power to keep us from unraveling–so sweet, Mike.

  9. Kavita says:

    Aww… very sweet, Mike… Love has that wonderful ability to mend things and give more meaning to them.. isn’t it?

    Well writ, my friend..

  10. Jingle says:

    this is superb ravel…

    sweet love …

  11. Bravo! and good luck with your new blog. I’m sure it will be a hit …

    Poem on …

  12. Sumit Sarkar says:

    Cheers to your love…
    very well written 🙂

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