Haiku Challenge, day 12

Haiku Challenge prompt image, day 12

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Simple band of gold
Encircles two lonely lives.
Linking two as one.

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17 Responses to Haiku Challenge, day 12

  1. trisha says:

    this is my favourite till now. beautiful, tender and true.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/11/balance/

  2. azfree says:

    Beautiful message. I love that it is not jaded or bitter, but pure.

  3. vivinfrance says:

    haiku simple but good. I found it impossible to think up anything original on this theme!

  4. Nanka says:

    Those were the nicest lines I’ve read so far Mike!! Bravo!!

    Let me add a chapter:

    Life is no bed of roses,
    It comes with ebb and tide,
    and all the up’s and down’s,
    hitches,glitches and ditches too 🙂

    All the very best Mike!!

    • Mike Patrick says:

      I’m a lucky man. I’ve lived a long life. Maybe I have achieved a degree of wisdom, because I really work at avoiding all those hitches, glitches and ditches. A wonderful woman helps a lot too.

  5. Tilly Bud says:

    I love this but, sadly, I am a technept so when I clicked on the five stars it looks like I only gave you four. What I really wanted was to give you ten.

    Loved it.

  6. honeyhaiku says:

    This is so true, and concisely put by your lovely haiku.

  7. sarah says:

    wow! such a beautiful weaving of words..i loved it a lot 🙂 perfect haiku!

  8. sweet! I totally enjoyed this one, I dig it hard! 🙂
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

  9. Jingle says:

    very true…

    well done.
    🙂

  10. cloakedmonk says:

    The unity and wholeness of the circle is well represented in your haiku of relationship.

    Shalom.

  11. ‘Linking two as one’ Loved it Mike.. Great..

    Someone is Special

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