Haiku Challenge, day 10










Empty is my heart.
Only a pillow to hold,
Now that love is gone.

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15 Responses to Haiku Challenge, day 10

  1. honeyhaiku says:

    Ah, I see that we are on the same page with this image. The pillow is an excellent refuge.

  2. cloakedmonk says:

    Lovely. Connects to a universal experience of love lost. You did a great job!


  3. sarah says:

    its amazing how a single image can prompt so many vivid ideas..another beautiful haiku 🙂
    mine has a similar thot..crafted differently…do check it out n let me know 🙂

  4. Nimue says:

    Simple and right on target !
    I could relate to this ..

  5. PinkLady says:

    a pillow always provides comfort especially in times of desolation. 🙂

  6. Jingle says:

    sad ending..
    well put.

  7. Bodhirose says:

    Such a sad place to be. I’m sure many can relate. Thanks, Mike.

  8. Becca Givens says:

    An amazing haiku to go along with the prompt – I am sure so many can relate — including me! If our pillows could tell stories ~~ hmm!!!

  9. I see a lot of us saw the same emotion–you express it with such skill.

  10. Someone is Special says:

    sad, very sad.. hope a nice love reaches you soon..

    Someone is Special

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